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New York Islanders Chris Hengel
This is Chris' first concept on HCI, so let's cut to the cheese!
The colo(u)r balance on the away jersey! Minus the numbers
The grey element kept in the 3rd
The tie down collars
The orange numbers on the black jersey
The filled in yoke on the third jersey
First, the presentation. The alternate gets lost because the background is so dark. Try using a light grey back ground.
The spacing of the numbers. The numbers seem too far apart.
While were on the topic of numbers, I think the away numbers should be Blue, and the home numbers be White.
The NOB font. It seems childish. Try using a arial or block font instead.
Using the same template for all 3 jerseys. The point of a third jersey is to be different. Not just a recolo(u)red Home/Away jersey. Check out our templates page for some great options!
I liked the colo(u)r balance in the jerseys, not as much the numbers. I also loved the yokes on all the jerseys, but aspeicialy the 3rd. That's really all I have to say about the jerseys, so...
Concept Rating, 8/10
Team Turkey (LOL) Jake88
The yoke on the home, the shoulder patches on the away
The pants logo
The small NOB
The fake laces. Not Jake but Nike
Jake brings us a amazing concept where (for once) I'm not complaining!
Concept Rating, 9.9/10
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