Maryland Terrapins Jake88
Jake88 bring us the first of 2 concepts for today.
Yay,
The flag striping
The font
The color balance
The UnderArmour template
Nay,
The triangle pants stripe, I would make it thinner and straight down.
The cuffs on the white jersey
The collar colors
Also, Since the "M" is so boring. I would have a wordmark or logo on the red one. And relocate the M to the shoulders
Overall,
When I first saw this concept, I fell in love with the flag stripes. Especially with a busy flag like Maryland's. Pulling that off is difficult. The font choice matched up well too.
Concept Rating, 8.75/10
Yay,
The arm stripes
The pants stripes
The sock stripes, ok. Just ALL THE STRIPES
Nay,
Bland/Boring template. Unlike the last one, which was awesome!
The colors, I would have had yellow as the main dark color with a maroon accent.
The yoke on the white. I think unless it portrays to the area is in (like flag stripes) college jerseys should be somewhat simple.
Concept Rating 8/10
It's my 2nd day in a row writing! Whooo. What do you guys think of the way I reviewed the jerseys? Anything I forgot to mention? Just tell me in the comments! And keep sending in your concepts! hockeyconceptideas@gmail.com
Thanks for reading!
Caden
Jake thanks for keeping Maryland modest!
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